'Song I've been working on' meaning I just thought of in the last 10 minutes.
Feel free to visit me in my hushed place
But don’t talk to me face to face
If you speak, sugarcoat your words
Why speak the truth when there’s nothing left to spur
So why even bother?
Why even try?
I’ve been dismantled down
Broken heart as a meager cry
Was I not strong enough?
What I’d do wrong?
In my own loosely seamed trance
But oh, before long
I’ve been taken down
Wednesday, June 3, 2009
Random song I've been working on
Posted by Jenny at 8:40 PM
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2 comments:
Wow...that's powerful.
Hannah seconds the motion of Rachel VERY MUCH so, and is uber jealous cause she wishes she'd thought of it. :P Wow, way to capture my thoughts and emotions as of late there. I think people can always really relate to that. Wow.
~Hannah
PS. i want to hear the tune now, though, cause i can't think of one that would work, not like you think of them. :)
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